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The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Fairmont Island, according to a survey of visitors.

Due to visitors’ opinions, pie charts compare common pros and cons of Fairmont Island.
Overall, according to the survey, almost half of all visitors complained about living expenditure, followed by the weather and entertainment, fewer surveyed visitors gave complaints about food quality. Moreover, when visitors were asked about the advantages of an Island, most of them commented positively about society and view, but the culture and accommodations were underrated figures in the survey.
Focusing on the common disadvantages first, living expenses is the figure which gained more complaints, accounting for 45%. The weather and entertainment facilities are at the second and third stages in the proportion of votes, with 30% and 20%, respectively. The quality of food is the aspect, for which the least visitors voted as disadvantages, at 5%.
As for the advantages, the inhabitants of Fairmont Island made good impressions on visitors, more, the figure for landscape was a bit lower to compare with the people, the former 37%, the latter 40%. Accommodation and culture were the aspects at the lower point in the survey list with a small difference, by 1%, according to visitors’ opinions, the higher figure Culture was at 12 percent.

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The essay presents information in a logical order, but transitions between ideas could be smoother. Some sentences are lengthy and could be broken down for clarity.

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  • Use linking words to connect ideas.
  • Break down complex sentences for clarity.
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The vocabulary used is adequate, but there is room for more varied and precise language.

The essay demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures but contains some errors that affect clarity.

The essay addresses the task requirements and includes relevant information from the pie charts. However, some details could be more clearly explained.

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  • Provide clearer comparisons between data points.
  • Ensure all key features from the charts are mentioned.