Tourist by region of origin (percent - %)
The pie chart and table show the distribution of tourists to a particular Australian holiday destination and their preferred travel methods.
Overall, Asian visitors make up the largest group, while Europeans stay the longest. Sightseeing is the most popular activity for tourists from Asia and the United States.
The pie chart shows that the largest percentage of tourists come from Asia, followed by Europe at 35%. American tourists make up 18% of the total, while those from other regions make up the smallest share at 10%. Visitors to the United States typically stay for 14 days, choose four-star accommodation, and focus on sightseeing. Tourists from other regions stay for about 10 days, prefer camping or caravanning, and primarily engage in surfing.
European visitors, on the other hand, stay the longest – an average of 16 days – and often choose camping or caravanning, with swimming and sunbathing as their favorite activities.
The essay is logically organized and presents a clear overview. However, there are some areas where the flow of information could be improved.
Suggestions
- Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of information.
- Consider using more complex sentence structures to provide a more detailed analysis.
The essay uses a good range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of informal or colloquial language that could be improved.
The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and there are very few grammatical errors. However, there are a few instances of awkward or unclear phrasing that could be improved.
The essay provides a clear overview of the information presented in the pie chart and table. The key features are identified and described, and the information is presented in a logical sequence. However, the essay could be improved by providing more detailed analysis and by making more specific comparisons.
Suggestions
- Provide a more detailed analysis of the data, including reasons for the trends and comparisons between the different groups of tourists.
- Make more specific comparisons and use a wider range of structures to discuss the data.