The table compares the percentage of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features.
The table compares information about the proportion of people who used different types of phone features on mobile phones from 2006 to 2010.
Overall, almost all types of mobile phone features saw a significant increase in user percentages over the period. Notably, making calls was the most common feature on people’s devices in each given year in the table, becoming the primary mobile phone feature among people.
Turning to the specifics, in 2006, the proportion of mobile phone owners making calls was the highest figure among other feature users, at 100%. There was a noticeable disparity in the statistics for taking photos and chatting, with the latter being 7% more common than the former, at 73% and 66%, respectively. Meanwhile, the percentages of individuals playing games and music on their mobile phones were relatively low, at 17% and 12%, respectively.
After a couple of years, new features were added to the mobile phone capabilities list, including internet browsing and video recording, accounting for 41% and 9% of usage, respectively. Despite these additions, the percentage of mobile phone users making calls remained dominant at 100%. Although there was an increase in the figures for photography and massage, there was still a slight difference, with massage dominating at 75%, while photography grew to 71%. The proportion of persons who played games increased significantly from 17% to 42% between 2006 and 2008. Similarly, the figure for listening to music also rose gradually to 18%.
In the final year, there were many changes in the percentage of mobile phone owners utilizing various device features. The most significant changes were witnessed among the people who searched the internet, from 41% in 2008 to 73% in 2010. The figures for massaging and picturing reached around 76% for each. The percentage of individuals playing games, recording videos, and listening to music has increased to 41%, 35%, and 26%, respectively. In addition, the proportion of people making calls remains unchanged, at almost 100%, becoming the most popular mobile phone facility.
The essay is well-organized with a clear progression of ideas. There is a logical sequence in presenting data from 2006 to 2010.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to enhance flow.
- Ensure consistent use of terms (e.g., ‘text messages’ instead of ‘chatting’).
The vocabulary is appropriate and varied, though some terms could be more precise.
The grammar is generally accurate with a good range of structures. Some minor errors are present.
The essay effectively covers the main trends and comparisons in the data.
Suggestions
- Provide more detailed comparisons where possible.