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The table reveals the total territory of world forest are in six continents in the years 1990, 2000 and 2005.
Forest area rose in ha only in Europe and Asia, albeit slightly within the given period. Europe – the largest area – had 989 ha wood in 1990, before rising minimally, passing 998 in 2000 and finally arriving at 1001 ha in 2005. Despite a reduction of 6 ha in 2000, the figure for Asia went up by 14 ha to 584 ha in the final year.
The other continents experienced a drop in their forest land, with South America witnessing the most significant fall from 946 ha in 1990 to 882 ha in 2005. Likewise, there was 60 ha decline in the rate of Africa, dipping to 691 ha in the year end. Continents of North America and Oceania had marginal declines within fifteen years, going down from 708 to 705 and from 199 to 197, respectively.
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