The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The two maps illustrate how the village of Ryemouth has developed over a period 30 years.
In general, it is clear that, Ryemouth has seen major significant changes with natural areas like farmland and the forest park being replaced by new facilities, while the fishing industry has been removed to way for housing and modern services.
In 1995, the northeastern part of the village was farmland and forest park was located just south it. By the present, the farmland has replaced by a golf course, while tennis court has been constructed on the site of the forest park. Housing in the northwest has expanded with additional houses built.
Along the southern side, the fish market has been replaced by apartments and fishing port has been removed. Shops near the hotel have been changed into restaurant and car park has been added next to the hotel. Additionally, the cafe along the coastline has remained unchanged.
The essay is generally well-organized with a clear progression of ideas. However, some sentences lack clarity and smooth transitions.
Suggestions
- Ensure each sentence logically follows the previous one.
- Use more linking words to improve flow.
- Clarify relationships between changes.
The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, though some word choices are awkward or repetitive.
The essay contains several grammatical errors, particularly with verb forms and articles.
The essay effectively addresses the task, describing the key changes in the village of Ryemouth.