The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010
The bart chart provide data on the percentage of males and females who got their driving license in one Asian country between 1980 and 2010.
Overall, according to the chart females succeeded in their driving test more than males dominating in the percentage of passed driving exams throughout the whole timem frame.
From 1980 to 1990 the number of women who passed driving test did not see any significant changes remaining at aroung 50% initially. By 2000 this feature registered a significant increase of almost 20% reaching it’s peak and despite a slight increase in 2010 the percentage of women with positive test results was superior to men.
In contrast, at he begining of the period the number of males who passed driving test was approximately half as much with about 25-30%. However, the percentage of men showed almost similar pattern of growth of roughly 10% in 1990 and 2000. Onwards the number of men remained steadily until end of the period managing to reach it’s peak of almost 50% which is initial minimum of females percentage who got their driving license.
The essay presents information logically but lacks clear paragraphing and transitions.
Suggestions
- Use clearer paragraph divisions to separate different points.
- Include linking words to improve flow.
- Provide a clearer summary at the end.
The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some repetition and minor errors.
The essay contains several grammatical errors, affecting clarity.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis and clear comparisons.
Suggestions
- Include more specific data from the chart to support statements.
- Make clearer comparisons between the trends for men and women.
- Summarize key points at the end.