The maps show what an office building looks at present and plans on future development.
The maps demonstrate a present view of an office building and how it will look in the future with several developments.
Overall, the establishment is expected to undergo a drastic transformation, resulting in larger rooms and additional areas. The most significant alteration will be the disappearance of grasses on both sides of the building and the relocation of the entrance and reception.
Looking at the map as described, there is an entrance on the left side of the building, along which are a few offices lined towards the west. There are now two grasslands, long in size, both the left and right parts of the office. Heading to the north, there are three rooms, namely the kitchen on the left, the canteen in the middle and the stock room on the right, with WCs below the stock room.
Looking at the proposed developments for the office, the entrance is estimated to relocate to the centre between two offices on the bottom of the building. Another potential change will be the appearance of a meeting area, where there is now a grass area in the easter part, while the latter grassland will be probably turned into an outdoor seating area. Interestingly, two offices are now at the bottom of the map and are planned to relocate to the top of the building. A new coffee machine is also estimated to appear above the meeting area along with WCs. The only room that will remain unchanged, however, is the Stock room.
The essay is logically organized with a clear progression of ideas. However, some transitions between descriptions could be smoother.
Suggestions
- Use more cohesive devices to link ideas.
- Ensure all parts of the building are described in a systematic manner.
- Clarify the sequence of changes more explicitly.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary appropriate for describing changes in a building layout, though some word choices could be more precise.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay effectively describes the changes between the current and future layouts of the office building. All key features are covered.