The maps show what an office building looks at present and plans on future development.
The maps demonstrate a present view of an office building and how it will look in the future with several developments.
Overall, the establishment is expected to see a drastic transformation, resulting in larger rooms and additional areas. It is also worth mentioning that the most significant alteration will be the disappearance of grasses on both sides of the building and the relocation of the entrance along with the reception.
Looking at the map as described at present, there is an entrance on the left side of the building, along which are a few offices lined towards the west. There are now two grasslands, long in size, both the left and right parts of the office. Heading to the north, there are three rooms, namely the kitchen on the left, the canteen in the middle and the stock room on the right, with WCs below the stock room.
Looking at the proposed developments for the office, the entrance is estimated to relocate to the centre between two offices on the bottom of the building. Another potential change will be the appearance of a meeting area, where there is now a grass area in the easter part, while the latter grassland will be probably turned into an outdoor seating area. Interestingly, two offices are now at the bottom of the map and are planned to relocate to the top of the building. A new coffee machine is also estimated to appear above the meeting area along with WCs. The only room that will remain unchanged, however, is the Stock room.
The essay is well-organized with a clear progression of ideas. However, some sentences could be more logically connected.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
The essay uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words and phrases could be more precise.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, though there are minor errors.
The essay effectively describes the current and future layouts of the office building, addressing all key features.