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The diagram illustrates the process of recycling paper.

The diagram illustrates the process of recycling paper. Overall, the process is complicated, having four main stages. Notably, the recycling process begins with collecting used paper and ends with producing paper using heated rollers.
First of all, used paper is put onto a conveyor belt, a mechanical system for transporting items. Then, in the second step, the used paper is mixed with water chemicals in a pulping machine, where the pulp, a soft material, is created. After that, the mixed pulp is sifted to remove larger particles, resulting in filtered pulp, completing the first two stages of the procedure.
Next, the filtered pulp undergoes a cleaning process. The filtered pulp is poured through a tube into a large bath-shaped dish, where it is mixed with water and soap. Air is introduced to help remove ink and other contaminants, which results in cleaned pulp stored in a box-shaped container. In the final steps, the cleaned pulp passes through heated rollers on the conveyor belt, forming recycled paper.

7.5

The essay is logically organized with clear progression through the stages of the process.

Suggestions
  • Use more linking words to enhance flow.
  • Clarify the transitions between stages.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary appropriately but lacks variety in some areas.

The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.

The essay effectively describes the process and includes all key stages.