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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The first bar graph illustrates the percentage of men and women do household chores (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and house repairing) in an unspecified country. The second bar graph compares the time they spend doing those tasks.
Overall, both genders engaged with cooking and cleaning more than other two with the percentage of females engaging in cooking and cleaning dominated and the amount of time they spend for these domestic responsibilities was more than those of males. Men did more pet caring but the amount of time both genders spend was the same. House repairing was did the last, with men leading.
Cooking was the most engaged house chore. The percentage of women doing it was more than 80% while men had 20 percentage units less. Females did cleaning stood at a bit above than 60% while males had 40%. Males and females did pet caring a bit above 20% and 20 %, correspondingly. Men did house repairs was below than 20%, while women only had below than 10%.
The amount of time spent on cooking was higher than others, with female spending more than 80 minutes and male an hour. Cleaning required 68 minutes from females and 45 from males. 20 minutes for pet caring was the same for both genders, while house repairing for men demanded less than 20 minutes and about 5 minutes for women.

6.0

The essay presents information in a logical order, but some transitions between ideas are abrupt, and the use of cohesive devices is limited.

Suggestions
  • Use more linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
  • Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
  • Avoid repetition of similar phrases.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and repetitions.

There are several grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect comprehension.

The essay addresses the task and includes relevant details, but lacks some depth in comparisons.

Suggestions
  • Provide more detailed comparisons between genders.
  • Include more specific data points to support statements.