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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows the percentages of women and men in a country involved in some kinds (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar graphs illustrate how doing home duties, namely cooking, cleaning, pet care and house repairs between male and female. The data is provided by persentage and minute.
Overall, Females spent more time on cooking and had the leading position in two proportions, followed by cleaning. Males trend for the cleaning exhibited the same pattern in minute and persentage. Notably, Pet care and house repairs were almost the same in both categories
Initially, Females ranked the leading position for cooking , showing almost 80%, followed by cleaning in both genders, exhibiting Females 62% and Males 40% , respectively. The proportion for pet care and house repairs , however, almost 20 persentage units was true for Females and Males, Females in than Males,comparing around 10%.
Cooking was not the primarily activity for females and less 10 persentage units than Males
In contrast, the proportion of cleaning was the highest and it was true for Females, made up above 80%, followed by cleaning in women more about 8 persentage units than the proportion of cooking in men. Cleaning for the Males experienced around 45%. Notably, pet care and house repairs were the lowest figures. The pet care was the same in both genders, accounting for 20%. For males, house repairs accounted for slightly less 10 percentage units than pet care, while for females, house repairs had the lowest proportion.

5.0

The essay lacks clear organization and logical progression of ideas. There are several instances of unclear comparisons and abrupt transitions between ideas.

Suggestions
  • Organize the essay into clear paragraphs.
  • Use linking words to connect ideas more effectively.
  • Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea.

The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with several spelling errors and awkward phrasing.

The essay contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms and sentence fragments.

The essay attempts to describe the data but lacks precision and clarity in reporting key features and making comparisons.

Suggestions
  • Clearly describe the main trends and differences between genders.
  • Ensure accurate representation of data from the charts.