The graph illustrates data about the number of international students who studied at a UK university between 1995 and 2015.
The graph illustrates data about the number of international students who studied at a UK university between 1995 and 2015.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were significant upward trends in both Asia and North America, while the trends for Africa and Europe stayed unchanged despite small changes over a period spanning from 1995 and 2015. Another interesting point is that Asia was predominant throughout the whole period.
Looking at the details, as regards Asia, it started the period at 60 in 1995. At this point, the figure soared, finishing at 120 in 2015 – marking a two-fold increase. Having remained almost unchanged by 2010, it then rose sharply in the last five years, reaching 70 in 2015.
By contrast, there were almost no changes in the number of students from Africa and Europe. Despite small fluctuations, they figures remained at 20 for Africa and 50 for Europe, which were the same with their initial numbers.
The essay provides a general overview and some detailed points. However, there is a lack of clear structure in presenting the trends for each continent.
Suggestions
- Organize the essay into clear paragraphs for each region.
- Use linking words to better connect ideas.
The vocabulary used is appropriate, but there is some repetition and lack of variety.
The essay demonstrates a basic range of grammatical structures with some errors.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis of all regions and includes some inaccuracies.
Suggestions
- Provide more detailed analysis for each region.
- Ensure accuracy in describing trends.