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The table provides data on annual milk production in four distinct nations- the Dutch, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala- in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010, measured by liters. Overall, figures for nearly all countries witnessed upward trends, albeit with varing degrees, with the exception of Australia. Notably, the Netherlands was by far the largest producer of milk in all years, whrease revers was true for Guatemala, even though it’s milk production increased four times by the end of the span.
Delving into the details, the Netherlands produced the greatest proportion of milk, topping the chart throughout the timeframe, yet with a minor growth. In 1990, rates for this continent stood at 11,262,000, and then experienced a slight dip within a decade. After recovering to 11,466,000 in 2010, county maintained it’s leading position. As for Tanzania and Guatemala, the numbers had undergone a significant-rising tendency, at start grew from 87,000 and 26,000 to 1,42,000 and 55,000 respectively, in 2000. Following this, patterns for latter country roughly quadrupled while former one rose by a mere 13,000.
Moving on to the only nation with downward trend, it could be observed that Australia ranked second with it’s considerable share in milk production. In 1990, nation accounted for 11,246,000, a figure which a bit lower than that of leader county. Unfortunately, following years turned out to be a quite negative for this country. After declining to 11,105,000, this relative figure continued it’s downturn.

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The essay presents data in a logical order but lacks clear paragraphing and smooth transitions between ideas.

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The essay uses a range of vocabulary but includes some spelling and word choice errors.

There are several grammatical errors affecting clarity, such as incorrect possessive forms and punctuation issues.

The essay adequately describes the data and trends but lacks some precision in details.

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  • Ensure consistency in the presentation of data.