The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarize the information by slecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the changes in the proportion of households with cars in a particular country, European, from 1971 and 2001.
Overall, while the figure for 1 and 2 car ownership experienced an upward trend, that of with no car declined throughout. It is also clear that the proportion of no car and one car ownerships was relatively similar in 1981 and 1991, respectively.
In 1971, the percentage of one car ownership was about 35%, and households with two cars had almost 2 times lowest figure than one car ownership. Over the following 20 years, the figure for the former witnessed a growth, peaking at roughly 50% although fell to about 32% in 1981, and the latter also increased to approximately 30% in 1981 before losing 8 percentage points by 1991. Households with one car, nonetheless, saw a slight decline, falling to almost 45%, the reverse occurred in two car ownership, growing by about 10 percentage points, by the end of the period.
In contrast, the figure for non-car households had experienced a downward trend, falling from roughly 50% to about 30% throughout the period, in the final years, 1991 and 2001, this percentage held relatively stabilize.
The essay is logically organized, but some comparisons and transitions could be clearer.
Suggestions
- Improve the clarity of comparisons.
- Use more varied linking words.
- Ensure logical flow between sentences.
The vocabulary used is appropriate but lacks variety and precision.
There are some grammatical errors and awkward constructions that affect clarity.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed comparisons and clear data presentation.
Suggestions
- Include more detailed comparisons.
- Present data more clearly.
- Ensure all main features are covered.