There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: -describe the problems -explain how these problems are effecting you and others -suggest what could be done about it.
Task 1
Dear Sir or Madam
The reason why I am writing you this letter to explain some problems with public transport which pupolation use for daily commuting.
Nowadays public transport system is developing significantly in many countries. So most people use from public transport instead of their own car or other transports. As a result, it cause to big traffic jam. Because public transport schedule have not ordered.
These problems are affecting significantly to me and other people. Many people go to work in the morning every day and the big traffic jam usually happen in this time. Additionally it can effect to working time and delaying. In this time, people feel stressed and they start their work with terrible mood.
I can suggest you some ways for fixing these issues. Firstly, you should have ideal ordered schedule for all public transports despite old one. It can reduce traffic jam and increase safety.
I would appreciate it if you unitile my suggestion. I hope you can solve these problems quickly.
Yours faithfully,
Boʻronova Sarvinoz.
The letter is logically organized, with a clear progression of ideas. However, there are some abrupt transitions and missing linking words that affect the overall flow. The letter follows a logical structure, but transitions between ideas are sometimes abrupt. Using linking words and cohesive devices more effectively could help smooth out these transitions. Additionally, rephrasing some sentences to avoid repetition and ensure clarity would enhance the overall coherence.
Suggestions
- Use a variety of cohesive devices to ensure smooth transitions between ideas.
- Avoid abrupt transitions and ensure that each paragraph flows logically from one to the next.
The letter uses a sufficient range of vocabulary and there is evidence of some less common and idiomatic language. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and collocation. The letter demonstrates a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are some awkward phrasings and issues with word choice. For example, “public transport which pupolation use for daily commuting” should be “public transport that the population uses for daily commuting.” Refining these choices would improve clarity and formality.
The letter uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and there are some errors in grammar and punctuation. However, these do not generally impede communication. The letter contains several grammatical errors that can hinder understanding. Paying closer attention to grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure would improve the overall quality of the letter. For example, “public transport which pupolation use for daily commuting” should be “public transport that the population uses for daily commuting.”
The letter provides a clear explanation of the problems with public transport and how they are affecting the writer and others. The letter also provides some suggestions for addressing these issues. However, the letter could be more formal and polite, and the suggestions could be more detailed and specific. The letter addresses the prompt by describing problems with public transport and their effects on commuters. However, the letter could be more formal and polite, and the suggestions could be more detailed and specific. For example, instead of simply suggesting improvements in the schedule, the letter could propose specific changes. Additionally, the tone of the letter is somewhat informal, so using a more formal tone would enhance the overall professionalism.
Suggestions
- Make the letter more formal and polite.
- Provide more detailed and specific suggestions for addressing the issues.