The diagram illustrates how recycled paper is made.
The diagram shows the production of recycled paper. Overall, this process can be divided into four stages: making pulp, filtering, cleaning, and recycled paper. It is also clear that water, soap and chemicals are the main ingredients in the process of recycling paper.
Initially, used paper travels on a conveyor belt toward a tank where it is converted to pulp using water and chemicals. The next tank filters unfiltered pulp. Filtered pulp is then mixed with water and soap in another tank to be cleaned. During this stage, with the help of an air pump, ink on the paper is discharged through a special pipe.
The final stage is producing recycled paper from the pulp coming out of the cleaner tank through a pipe. Once clean pulp has been turned into rollers at a high temperature, water is drained while it is still on the conveyor belt. The eventual product is clean and dry recycled paper.
The essay follows a logical sequence and clearly outlines the stages of paper recycling. However, some sentences could be more connected to improve the flow.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to connect ideas.
- Ensure each stage is clearly distinguished.
The vocabulary is appropriate and relevant, with some variety. However, further diversification could enhance the lexical resource.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay effectively covers the main stages of the recycling process and includes relevant details. It accurately reflects the diagram.