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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map illustrates the central library plan for today and how it looked like 20 years ago. In general, there are many differences in rooms and new added features, while the main structure didn’t change over this time
Delving into the details, The room sections changed its functions, Children’s books, for instance, relocated into the section where CD, videos and computer games were stored. Moreover, sofas have been appended and the room itself became slightly wider.
Also, adult fiction books ,that was in the middle of two west rooms, was displaced into the opposite side of the corridor; new structures such as information desk and self service machines have been attached in 20 years, while Enquiry desk and children’s books were replaced by Cafe and lecture room respectively. However, the reading room was displaced by Comuter room, while tables and chairs used to be located in the center of the library nowadays in not in use.

5.5

The essay presents information in a logical order but lacks clear paragraphing and transitions.

Suggestions
  • Use clear paragraphing to separate different points.
  • Add linking words to improve flow.
  • Ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary but with some inaccuracies.

There are several grammatical errors affecting clarity and precision.

The essay addresses the task but misses some key details and comparisons.

Suggestions
  • Include more specific details from the diagrams.
  • Make clear comparisons between the past and present layouts.
  • Ensure all major changes are covered.