The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet everyday form 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The chart illustrates the percentage of UK adults in various age groups who used the Internet daily from 2003 to 2006.
Overall, the chart clearly shows that internet usage was by far the most popular among 25-44 year olds, whereas the reverse was true for those aged 65 and over during the period in question.
For the 16-24 age group, internet usage remained flat at 80% from 2003 to 2004. Subsequently, the figures rose sharply to 100% in 2005, before decreasing to about 90% in 2006. For the 65+ age bracket, the percentage was roughly 18% and did not change during the two-year period from 2004 to 2005. In 2006, however, there was a slight increase in daily internet usage, which rose to 20%. Notably, the oldest age group did not use the Internet in 2003.
In contrast, the figures for 25-44 year olds were significant, starting with just 50% in 2003, improved to 80% in over four years.For the 45-54 age group, usage did not decline and grew from 60% to 80%. Despite fluctuations from 2003 to 2005, the internet is used more among 55-64 age categories and reached to 50% in 2006.
The essay is logically organized with a clear overview. However, some sentences could be more connected to improve flow.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to improve flow.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
- Clarify comparisons between age groups.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary accurately, though more variety could enhance it.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, but some errors are present.
The essay effectively summarizes the main features and makes relevant comparisons. It covers all aspects of the task.