How recycled paper is made.
The diagram illustrates the process involved in recycling paper.
Overall, this process consists of four main steps which is involved in the recycling the used paper and,it is also obvious that the recycling process involves some mechanical and chemical treatments aimed at transferring into a clean and usable product.
In the first stage of recycling paper,the used paper is transported on a conveyor belt into the pulping machine where it is mixed with water and chemical.In the second stage,in order for used paper is to be cleaned,it is transferred to the filtering step where its large particles are removed from it.
Subsequently,in the third stage involves cleaning,in this step,it is mixed with water and soap and also air helped to remove the ink and result is cleaned paper.Finally,in the final step, heated rollers are paved on a conveyor belt and the paper is rolled into this conveyor belt and formed new and recycled paper and then it ready to use
The essay presents a basic structure but lacks clear linking words and logical progression.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to connect ideas.
- Ensure each stage is clearly distinct and follows logically from the previous one.
- Avoid repetition of information.
The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some incorrect usage.
The essay contains several grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed explanation of each stage.
Suggestions
- Provide more detailed descriptions of each stage.
- Ensure all stages mentioned in the diagram are covered.