the chart results a survey about buying and drinking coffee and tea in 5 cities in australia. summarize information .
It illustrates by the bar chart some data about outcome of a survey people’s consumption Which contains buying and drinking Coffee and tea habits in five different cities.It can be seen café have been popular in five cities beside that fresh coffee had
Least figures.
Initially, went to a café was most favorite option for coffee and tea for last 4 weeks And Hobart city beside Melbourne which more than 60 precent and then Sydney Was third city and figure indicated around 60 precent after that Brisbane decreased Dramatically to 50 precent however Adelaide achieved 55 precent which was
A Considerable rise.What’s more bought instant coffee in last 4 weeks was second option Though some cities percentages were close to each others such as Sydney, MelbourneAnd Adelaide that all of them were between 45 to 50 precent in addition Hobart and Brisbane were increased a more level and reached to more than 50 precent.Fresh coffee in Sydney and Melbourne were under 45 precent however others city
Much lower.
In conclusion, went a café and hangout there seems is the most popular choice.
The essay has a logical flow of information and ideas, but there are some unclear connections. The use of cohesive devices is somewhat inconsistent, and some parts of the text are difficult to follow.
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- Use a variety of cohesive devices appropriately.
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The essay uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and inappropriate word choices.
The essay has a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and inaccuracies.
The essay provides a basic summary of the information presented in the chart, but the details are not clearly or accurately described. The essay does not fully address the task requirements.
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