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Some people believe that history is no longer relevant in today’s world. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some people that history has lost its significance in today’s modern world since past events can influence how we address current problems. I believe that it needs to be carefully studied and discussed.
One compelling reason to value history is its ability to help us learn from past mistakes and avoid repeating them in the future. The global economy’s collapse in 1929-The Great Depression highlighted the importance of regulations in banking and financial industries. However, history shows we failed to fully learn from it, as similar practices contributed to 2008’s global financial crisis. Apart from that, historical knowledge also offers insights into the evolution of politics, education, governance, and conflict resolution. For instance, the development of the English law in the middle ages providing common law principles demonstrates how historical precedents continue to shape current modern legal systems.
On the other hand, some argue that history holds limited importance in modern challenges such as artificial intelligence and climate change and requires modern approaches. Therefore, historical lessons may reflect outdated values or practices that are incompatible with contemporary perspectives. Despite studying history extensively, humanity has repeatedly engaged in destructive wars, World War I and World War II, suggesting historical lessons on peace are often ignored. The fact that discrimination and inequality still exist in the world today, in spite of past civil rights and inequality movements shows that lessons learned from the past frequently are mostly ineffective in changing the way society behaves.
In conclusion, studying has shown humanity, how much there is to understand. While I think history is important, I feel I am not in a position to definitively judge whether it is entirely useful or not in today’s world.

7.5

The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The introduction and conclusion are clear and relevant. However, there are a few areas where the flow of ideas could be improved.

Suggestions
  • Try to use a wider range of linking words to connect your ideas.
  • Ensure that your examples are directly relevant to the point you are making.

The essay uses a wide range of vocabulary and there is evidence of less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The essay uses a wide range of complex structures. However, there are a few grammatical errors and awkward constructions.

The essay addresses the task effectively, presenting a clear position throughout. The arguments are well-developed and supported with relevant examples. However, the conclusion could be stronger.

Suggestions
  • Try to make your conclusion more impactful. You could summarize your main points and restate your position more forcefully.