the graph below shows the average house prices in three countries between the years 1997 and 2014.
The line graph illustrates changes in the house prices, measured in thousands of dollars, in three nations from 1997 to 2014. Overall, all the countries saw an increasing trend over the period in terms of average house prices, with the figure for country A experiencing the most marked growth. It is also clear that the house prices were the lowest in country C throughout.
In 1997, the average house cost around 125 thousand dollars in county A, slightly higher compared with county B, at about 120. Following seven years, both of these figures increased, although the rise in county A was more significant, which rose to more than 500 thousand dollars. By 2014, the house prices had reached just below 750 and 500 thousand dollars, respectively after a period of slight decline between 2004 and 2008.
Meanwhile, the house prices in country C also increased, but remained the cheapest as oppose to the two other nations. From 1997 to 2007, the figure for it increased constantly from approximately 120 to nearly 250. Ensuing a year, the house prices saw a noticeable dip before reverting back and registering an uptick to 250 in the final year.
The essay is logically organized with a clear overview and detailed comparisons. However, some transitions between ideas could be smoother.
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- Use more linking words to improve flow.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus.
- Avoid minor inconsistencies in data reporting.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, though some word choices could be improved for precision.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, but there are minor errors that affect accuracy.
The essay effectively addresses the task, providing a clear overview and detailed comparisons of the data.
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- Ensure all data points mentioned are accurate.
- Include more specific data points for clarity.