the graph below shows the average house prices in three countries between the years 1997 and 2014.
The line graph illustrates changes in the house prices, measured in thousands of dollars, in three nations from 1997 to 2014. Overall, all the countries saw an increasing trend over the period in terms of average house prices, with the figure for country A experiencing the most marked growth. It is also clear that the house prices were the lowest in country C throughout.
In 1997, the average house cost around 125 thousand dollars in county A, slightly higher compared with county B, at about 120. Following seven years, both of these figures increased, although the rise in county A was more significant, which rose to more than 500 thousand dollars. By 2014, the house prices had reached just below 750 and 500 thousand dollars, respectively after a period of slight decline between 2004 and 2008.
Meanwhile, the house prices in country C also increased, but remained the cheapest as oppose to the two other nations. From 1997 to 2007, the figure for it increased constantly from approximately 120 to nearly 250. Ensuing a year, the house prices saw a noticeable dip before reverting back and registering an uptick to 250 in the final year.
The essay is generally well-organized with a clear overview and logical progression of ideas.
Suggestions
- Ensure consistent use of country names throughout.
- Use linking words to enhance flow between sentences.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary with some less common words.
The essay demonstrates a variety of sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors.
The essay addresses the task effectively, providing a clear overview and relevant details.
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- Include more specific data points from the graph to support descriptions.