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the graph below shows the average house prices in three countries between the years 1997 and 2014.

The line graph illustrates changes in the house prices, measured in thousands of dollars, in three nations from 1997 to 2014. Overall, all the countries saw an increasing trend over the period in terms of average house prices, with the figure for country A experiencing the most marked growth. It is also clear that the house prices were the lowest in country C throughout.
In 1997, the average house cost around 125 thousand dollars in county A, slightly higher compared with county B, at about 120. Following seven years, both of these figures increased, although the rise in county A was more significant, which rose to more than 500 thousand dollars. By 2014, the house prices had reached just below 750 and 500 thousand dollars, respectively after a period of slight decline between 2004 and 2008.
Meanwhile, the house prices in country C also increased, but remained the cheapest as oppose to the two other nations. From 1997 to 2007, the figure for it increased constantly from approximately 120 to nearly 250. Ensuing a year, the house prices saw a noticeable dip before reverting back and registering an uptick to 250 in the final year.

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The essay is logically organized and presents a clear overview of the trends. However, there are a few areas where the flow of information could be improved.

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  • Use a variety of cohesive devices to improve the flow of information.
  • Consider using more complex sentence structures to provide a more detailed analysis of the data.

The essay uses a good range of vocabulary and there is evidence of some less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The essay uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms and there are only minor errors. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect sentence structure.

The essay provides a clear overview of the trends and presents relevant data to support the analysis. However, the essay could be improved by providing more detailed comparisons and analysis of the data.

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  • Provide more detailed comparisons and analysis of the data to enhance the argument and provide a more comprehensive answer.