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The two maps below show an island, befor and after the constructions of some tourist facilities

The picture illustrates the transformation of an island, facilitating tourists with necessary buildings. Overall, many accommodations and necessary buildings were constructed for visitors, and a pier was built to allow guests to sail to the island.
Before the construction, the island was virtually empty, with only a few scattered palm trees. Fifteen bungalows were erected for tourists to stay in. In the center of the island now there is a reception building, which is surrounded by the accommodations. A large restaurant is now situated near the reception on the northern side of the island. People come to the reception by the path, which starts from the southern part, where there is a pier with some boats. On the west, there was a beach, and it has been transformed, now offering swimming facilities, unlike its previous state.
Despite the new developments, the northeastern side of the island remains unchanged and available for further construction.

7.5

The essay maintains a logical flow and clear structure, effectively describing the changes between the two maps.

Suggestions
  • Use more linking words to enhance flow.
  • Provide clearer transitions between paragraphs.
  • Summarize the main points at the end.

The vocabulary is appropriate and varied, though some repetition is present.

The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.

The essay effectively addresses the task by describing the changes shown in the maps.

Suggestions
  • Include more specific details from the maps.
  • Ensure all key features are highlighted.