The table illustrations resendential use of water in one country between 1988 and 2008.
The table illustrations resendential use of water in one country between 1988 and 2008.
Overall, water used a lot of for bathroom and washing clothes, over time this percentage changed palces. We can see like that is situation toilet and garden. Regardless of kitchen gained low percentage, over time it gained the highest level.
In 1988, the most use water for washing clothes 25% and this figure declined by 2008 at 22%. One of high percentages to used water in the bathroom was 22 % in 1988, while by 2008 this figure increased significantly 27%.
Although to used a lot of water for Garden among 1988 (20%), this fugure decreased dramatically at 9% in 2008. We can see similar situation to used water from Toilet too. In 1988, water is used 18%, while by 2008 this percentage reduced by 14%. At the table among 1988 gained the lowest percentage Kitchen, however by 2008 this figure gained the highest level.
The essay lacks clear structure and logical flow. Transitions between ideas are unclear, making it difficult to follow the argument.
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- Use clear topic sentences for each paragraph.
- Ensure logical progression of ideas.
- Use linking words to connect sentences and paragraphs.
The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary and some incorrect word choices.
The essay contains frequent grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in the description of data trends.
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- Provide more detailed descriptions of data trends.
- Ensure accuracy in reporting data from the table.