The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram provides information about the plastic courage recycling process.
Overall , this process includes 9 steps that began with us throwing the bottles into the trash and finishing with getting clothes , new bottles and other products from them .
The process starts with throwing all bottles into special trashes , the second thing is that the special car carries them to the recycling centre . In Sorting workers divide bottles looking at their quality . After that all bottles that are capable to be recycled will be compressed into blocks .
All compressed blocks will be crushed through machine and through to the water to wash them . The next step is producing plastic pellets through special apparatus . Then pellets must be heated to shape raw materials. And in the last step thanks to raw materials we can got a lot of new products
The essay follows the sequence of the recycling process, but lacks smooth transitions between steps.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to improve flow.
- Ensure each step is clearly connected to the next.
- Avoid abrupt transitions.
The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision.
The essay contains several grammatical errors and lacks complex structures.
The essay describes the process but lacks detail and comparative analysis.
Suggestions
- Include more detail in each step.
- Make comparisons where relevant.
- Ensure all steps are clearly explained.