The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the percentage of people living in cities in four Asian countries (the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand, and Indonesia) between 1970 and 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Overall, urbanization increased in all four countries during the period. Malaysia consistently had the highest urban population percentage, while the Philippines and Thailand showed slower growth. Indonesia experienced a significant rise and is predicted to surpass the Philippines by 2040.
In 1970, Malaysia had the largest proportion of urban residents at about 30%, which rose steadily to 70% in 2020 and is expected to reach nearly 85% by 2040. Indonesia started at only 10% in 1970 but experienced dramatic growth, reaching 50% by 2020. Its urban population is predicted to increase further, surpassing 60% in 2040.
The Philippines and Thailand had relatively similar urbanization rates at the start of the period, around 30% in 1970. However, their trends diverged. By 2020, the Philippines reached 50%, and it is forecasted to rise slightly to 60% in 2040. Thailand, on the other hand, showed slower growth, increasing to around 40% by 2020, with predictions suggesting it will remain the lowest among the four countries, at approximately 45% in 2040.
The essay is well-organized with a clear overview and logical progression of ideas. Comparisons are made effectively, and the information is presented clearly.
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- Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
The essay uses a good range of vocabulary with some variety and precision. Some phrases could be more varied to enhance the lexical resource.
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The essay addresses the task effectively, summarizing the main trends and making relevant comparisons. It provides an accurate summary of the data.
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