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The plans show an office in a university in 2005 and the same office now.

The given map compares the design of the office currently and in the past.
Overall, it is evident that underwent several major changes including removal of the walls, reorganization and addition of new furniture.
In terms of the office reconstruction, 3 walls were demolished along with 2 doors in order to expand the area for one room. The room on the left northern corner remained untouched throughout the whole rearrangement. The corner on the right, that previously was a room, was reorganized, with a filling cabinet being removed. Moreover, two desks were added, and all four in total were relocated.
Delving further into the changes, a noticeboard was hung on the opposite wall. The corner on the left from the entrance was also redesigned. A sofa was added and a table was put there instead of the desks. Two armchairs were placed face-to-face with sofa. Right near the entrance a water cooler along with a coffee machine were placed. Meanwhile, the photocopier and two filling cabinets remained on the right of the entrance.

7.5

The essay is generally well-organized with a clear overview and logical progression of ideas.

Suggestions
  • Use more linking words to improve flow.
  • Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea.
  • Add a conclusion sentence to summarize changes.

The essay uses a good range of vocabulary with some minor errors.

The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with few errors.

The essay effectively covers the main features and changes of the office layout.

Suggestions
  • Include more specific details about furniture placement.