The pie chart shows the differences in the energy production in 2 years
The pie chart shows the differences in getting energy in 2 years (1995,2005)
Overall, the production of coal energy kept the dominance in both 2 years. Meanwhile, producing petro reduced dramatically in 2005.
Delving into details, coal produced in the biggest percentages in both 1995 and 2005 with 29.80 and 30.93,respectively. In other types of energy productions can be seen small rises. Nuclear and other energy sources both developed by approximately 5 percent with 9.10 for other and 10. 10 percent for Nuclear in 2005
In the 1995, gas production showed 0,17 percent less compare to the dominant. However, this figure reached to 0,62 percent in the 2005, keeping its production the second largest in both years. Big changes can be seen in petro production, as well. In 1995,petro production exhibited 29,27 percent of overall production which was only 0.53 percent less than coal’s production. However, it declared its production by almost 10 percent in 2005
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