map Ryemouth village
The map illustrates the significant changes of the village of Ruemouth since 1995.
Overall, there are small changes, which include replacements of shops, fish markets, forest park, farmland and construction of new facilities in the village.
In 1995, there were forest park with some trees in the east side of the village, with fishing port from the bottom, and several houses in the north east corner and in the center left. It is clear that many shops and fish market situated from both side of the road with café and hotel nearby.
Residential areas have been expanded, in where farmland and forest park stood there are now sports centers (golf and tennis). Shops have been replaced by a number of restaurants. Similarly, Fish markets have gone and now its place belongs to apartments. A second café park were constructed in the right side of the hotel, with no access to fishing port.
Despite the apparently significant changes, the village retains the basic elements of housing, with the addition of a new café, restaurants, and apartments.
The essay presents information logically, but some sentences lack clear connections. There are abrupt transitions between ideas.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to improve flow.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence.
- Clarify relationships between changes.
The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision. Some word choices are repetitive or unclear.
The essay contains frequent grammatical errors, affecting clarity. Sentence structures are often repetitive.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis of changes. Some key details are missing or inaccurately described.
Suggestions
- Include more specific details about changes.
- Ensure accurate description of map features.
- Provide deeper analysis of the changes.