sea animal
The graph compares number of sea animals (seals, whales, and dolphins) recorded in Gormez Straits between 2006 and 2018.
It is clear that the number of animals given experienced an overall increase, with dolphins becoming the dominant among all other animals over the 12-year period.
In 2006, 42 seals, half of that number of whales, and 18 dolphins were available in Gormez Straits. The number of seals decreased substantially to around 24 in 2010 before recovering to 44 by the end of the period. Similarly, the number of dolphins went up dramatically from 18 in 2006 to 52 in 2018, whereas the figure of whales rose slightly to 28 by 2018, with some fluctuations.
In summary, dolphins saw the highest change, while whales experienced the lowest throughout the period. The number of seals showed a steady growth with a considerable decline over the following years.
The essay is generally well-organized, with a clear introduction and summary. However, some sentences could be better connected to enhance flow.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to improve flow.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence.
- Connect ideas smoothly between sentences.
The essay uses a good range of vocabulary, but some word choices could be more precise.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay effectively addresses the task, summarizing key trends and providing relevant comparisons.
Suggestions
- Ensure all key features from the graph are summarized.
- Provide more detailed comparisons where relevant.