The bar chart shows the share of poverty of the rural areas in the years 1993 and 2002. The ple chart shows the rural area share and the urban area share of poverty in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the percentages the poverty of the six different suburban areas from 1993 to 2002. While the pie chart illustrates the shares of the poverty of the urban areas in the year 2002.
Overall, East Asia & Pacific had the largest proportions in terms of improverished population in each years compared to other rural areas. Most rural areas showed higher percentages in 1993 than in 2002, except for Europe & central Asia, where the reverse was true. While in the pie chart, the proportions of poverty of the rural areas were higher compared to Urban areas in 2002.
Focusing on the largest figures, East Asia & Pacific accounted for the highest shares of improverished population albeit these figures remined stable in each year. But other rural areas showed higher proportions in 1993 than in 2002.
The essay generally follows a logical structure but lacks clear transitions between ideas.
Suggestions
- Use linking words to improve flow.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea.
- Clarify comparisons between data.
Vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and includes some inaccuracies.
The essay demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but contains grammatical errors.
The response addresses the task but lacks detailed analysis and comparison.
Suggestions
- Include more detailed comparisons between rural and urban areas.
- Provide specific data points to support statements.
- Ensure all parts of the task are covered.