Write a letter to a local newspaper expressing your opinion about an environmental issue in your community. In your letter, include: • A brief introduction of yourself and why you are writing • The specific environmental issue you are concerned about • Your opinion on the issue and any suggestions for improvement • A call to action for readers or local authorities

Dear sir or madam
As well as,the rubbish can also negative impact to our environment,animals and even our health.l have decided collect rubbish with our community.However rubbish can caused air pollution and health issues such as diabets,heart diseases and wildlife.Rubbish can dramatically effect crops and lands.l would like also to decrease rubbish where we collected.
Furthemore, l suggest some ideas for diminish of rubbish and in our community can help clean-up rubbish in our locol area.also the goverment should increase of fine for people if they throw rubbish. Allowing goverment set of cameres in our neighborhood for humans.this cen help limited negative actions.and people try to don’t throw rubbish in street.
l am hoping you emphasizes my ideas for decrease rubbish.if you recieve this solve which can help better life and fresh atmosphere.together we can make our community cleaner area and effective life

4.5

The letter is somewhat organized, but the flow of ideas is not very clear. There are some issues with cohesion, as well as some issues with paragraphing. The letter is somewhat organized, but the flow of ideas is not very clear. There are some issues with cohesion, as well as some issues with paragraphing. The letter is somewhat organized, but the flow of ideas is not very clear. There are some issues with cohesion, as well as some issues with paragraphing.

Suggestions

Use a variety of cohesive devices to ensure smooth transitions between sentences and paragraphs.
Make sure each paragraph has a clear main idea and follows logically from the previous one.

The letter uses a sufficient range of vocabulary and there is evidence of attempts to use less common items. However, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and spelling.

The letter uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms, and there are some errors in grammar and punctuation. However, these do not generally impede communication.

The letter addresses the task and presents a clear position throughout the response. However, the letter could provide more specific details and examples to support the points made.