The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.
The picture highlights the process by which olive oil is produced.
Overall, it can be seen that there are seven steps in the process, from gathering the olives from the trees to delivering and selling the product.
In the initial stages of the process, the olives are picked in the basket before being taken to the rinsing machine. First of all, it is washed with cold water and all the clean fruits are passed into the conveyor belt, after which it is smashed in another machine. Once the olive paste has been ready and separated from its stones, the olive paste is then bagged in a bag with holes.
After this stage is completed, the bags are placed under a press machine in order to extract olive oil from water. After dividing the willing oil into bottles, they are delivered to local markets and malls where they are stored and sold to customers
The essay follows a logical sequence, but some details are missing or unclear, particularly in the later stages.
Suggestions
- Clarify the separation process and how oil is extracted from water.
- Ensure consistent terminology for process stages (e.g., ‘press machine’ vs. ‘pressing’).
The vocabulary is appropriate but lacks variety and precision in some areas.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with some minor errors.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detail in some stages of the process.
Suggestions
- Include more detail about each stage, especially the separation and bottling processes.