The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.
The line graph compares the number of incidents in burglary, car theft and robbery in New Port city centre between 2003 and 2012.
Overall, it is noticeable that despite an overall decrease in the number of incidents, car theft overtook burglary in around 2006. Notably, robbery demonstrated the least significant changes throughout the period shown.
In 2003, just under 3500 burglaries were reported in New Port city centre, but this figure increased moderately to about 3600, the highest point on the chart. By 2008, there had been a consistent decrease to roughly 1200, representing a drop of around 2400 incidents. Over the following four years, the number of burglaries committed remained relatively stable at about 1200.
As for car theft, its figures were almost identical in the first three years, at nearly 2800 incidents. However, car theft surpassed burglary in approximately 2006, reaching around 2200 incidents. Despite continued growth in car theft until 2010, the number slightly declined by the end of the period, finishing at below 2500.
In contrast, robbery was the least common crime in New Port. For instance, this figure went down minimally over the period, starting at about 700 robberies in 2003 and falling slightly to around 600 robberies by 2012.
The essay is logically organized with clear progression and appropriate use of linking words. However, some areas could benefit from more precise linking to enhance clarity.
Suggestions
- Use more varied linking words to enhance flow.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
- Improve transitions between comparisons.
The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, though some repetition is present. More varied expressions could enhance the lexical resource.
The essay shows a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors that do not impede communication.
The essay effectively addresses the task, providing a clear overview and detailed comparisons of the data. The main trends are accurately described.
Suggestions
- Ensure all key features of the chart are covered.
- Provide more detailed comparisons between the different crimes.