The table details the number of individuals from other countries residing in 5 different European nations in 2011.
The table provides data on how many people resided, from 5 different countries – Britain, Germany, Italy, Poland and Spain – in each other’s nations, with total number of emigrants as well in 2011.
Overall, Germany was the most popular country for other people to immigrate, while Poland was the least popular one. Another interesting fact is that Polish people were most likely to emigrate to other countries; they were particularly keen on Germany, whereas Spanish people did not tend to move to other countries, with Germany being their favorite country tough.
Looking into the details, the most visited country for emigrants was Germany, with the total of nearly 1 million and two hundred thousand residing people from other nations, Italians being at the top with more than half a million people. The second most visitors to Germany were emigrants from Poland, which made up more than 426,000 people. Spanish and British people being the least visitors, they moved to Germany with the about 220,000 people multiplying both nations. Britain, on the other hand, welcomed an overall of 1,037,000 people; nearly the half of the guests were from Poland, accounting for 550,000 residents. The second most visitors were Germans, with nearly 300 thousand immigrants, followed by Italian and Spanish tourists.
The third most popular country for moving was Spain, accepting an overall of 861,000 immigrants, with British people being at the top with slightly less that 400,000 people. Other nations constituted to more than 50 percent of overall immigrants, with Polish residents being the least.
As for two other countries – Italy and Poland – they were not as popular place to move as the other abovementioned countries, with only 196,000 and 6,000 immigrants overall respectively.
The essay has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed analysis. However, some sentences are unclear, and transitions between ideas could be smoother.
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- Use more cohesive devices to link ideas.
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The essay demonstrates a good range of vocabulary relevant to the topic. However, some word choices are awkward or repetitive.
The essay uses a variety of grammatical structures, but there are noticeable errors in sentence construction and punctuation.
The essay addresses the task effectively, providing an overview and detailed analysis of the data. Some details are inaccurately represented.
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- Ensure all data mentioned is accurate and aligns with the table.