The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the amounts of fuel produced in the UK over 19 years.Units are measured in energy units.
Overall, it can be seen that petroleum was by far the most important type of fuel over the period shown. Coal was produced in the lowest amounts after 1991.
In 1981, petroleum was the main fuel which was produced around 100 energy units in the UK. Coal was generated exactly 80 energy units and was the second vital fuel. Natural gas was not the main fuel compared to others, with just under 40 energy units.
However, in 1991, natural gas overtook coal and ranked second on the production level list.Petroleum peaked with just over 140 energy units in 1991. In contrast, the amount of coal produced was decreased to almost half of their first year point as mentioned third type of fuel on the list (relatively 50 and 25 energy units). During this period, the figure for natural gas almost doubled (relatively 50 and 100 energy units).
The essay presents information in a logical sequence but lacks clear linking devices.
Suggestions
- Use more cohesive devices to connect ideas.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
- Clarify comparisons and contrasts.
The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with occasional errors.
The essay addresses the task and summarizes the main features but lacks detailed analysis.
Suggestions
- Include more specific data points for clarity.
- Provide a more detailed comparison between the fuels.