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The process details the steps involved in producing tomato ketchup.
Overall, there are four main stages in this entirely man-made process, starting with the initial harvesting and transportation of tomatoes, followed by the processing of tomatoes into ketchup, and ending with packaging and delivery of the product for consumption.
First, tomatoes are collected, put into baskets, and sorted by hand. The sorted tomatoes are then sent to a factory, where their stalks, seeds, and skins are removed. Subsequently, tomatoes are put in a container to be crushed, and the resulting liquid is added sugar, vinegar, and salt to give extra flavor to the ketchup. The mixture is then boiled and left for 2 hours to cool down.
The following step involves pouring the ketchup into bottles and labeling them. Once the labeled product passes quality control, the bottles are packed into boxes and sold to supermarkets. Finally, customers can buy the ready product and enjoy it with French fries and hamburgers.
The essay is logically organized and ideas are connected well. The use of cohesive devices is appropriate, and the progression of the essay is smooth.
Suggestions
- Consider using a wider range of linking words or phrases to show more variety.
The range of vocabulary is quite good and the essay uses some less common and idiomatic language. However, there are a few instances where word choice could be improved.
The essay uses a variety of complex structures and there are few grammatical errors.
The essay addresses all parts of the task and presents a clear overview of the process. The information is presented in a logical sequence and the essay describes the process in detail.
Suggestions
- Make sure to use an appropriate style and tone for the task. In this case, a more formal and academic style would be more suitable.