You borrowed a book from a friend and you have not yet returned it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

Hi Ogʻabek
I am writing to sincerely apologize for not returning your book on time. From my perspective, this book is absolutely important for you because this book has a lot of essential information and details. I use this book for my English tasks and chores.
This truth is, I have been extremely busy with work and personal commitments lately. In addition, I will ask you for this book in three or four more days. And I want to return this book from you but now this book is absolutely important for me.
I am apologize for the delay, I want to return on time. I think this book is absolutely important for you. In addition, I have an idea if I dropped this book by your house this sunday evening, and I would take your other book when we meet in your house.
Thank you for your understanding, and once again. I apologize for the delay, and I returned this book as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely
Xumorov Behruz

5.5

The essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion. However, the body of the letter seems to be muddled up with unclear points and repetitive sentences. The use of connectors and cohesive devices is inconsistent, which disrupts the flow of the letter. The letter lacks clarity in communicating the main idea due to repetitive and redundant sentences.

Suggestions

Try to maintain a clear and consistent point in each paragraph.
Use a variety of cohesive devices to link your ideas more clearly.

The letter uses a range of vocabulary but tends to repeat the same words and phrases. There are some inappropriate word choices and errors in word form that occasionally make the meaning unclear. The letter uses basic vocabulary that may be repetitive or inappropriate for the task. There are several instances of incorrect word choice and errors in word form that may cause confusion.

The letter contains several grammatical errors and inappropriate use of articles and prepositions. There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms and issues with sentence structure. The use of articles and prepositions is sometimes incorrect or missing.

The letter addresses the task but fails to provide a clear and concise explanation of the situation. The letter does not effectively communicate the main idea due to repetitive and redundant sentences. The letter does not effectively communicate the main idea due to repetitive and redundant sentences.