Task 1: Letter Writing You recently attended a workshop on time management skills organized by your local community center. You found the workshop very helpful and would like to express your gratitude to the organizer. Write a letter to the organizer. In your letter: • Thank them for the workshop • Mention what you found particularly helpful • Suggest any improvements for future workshops You should write at least 150 words

Dear Sir or Madam
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to apologize for not returning the book about O’tkir Hoshimov to my friend on time. I feel very sad for keeping this book a longer time. I promised and did not let you know as soon as possible.
The reason I haven’t returned his book yet is that I have been busy with my studying and personal commitments. On the one hand, I lost the book temporarily and only recently found it again. So that’s why I haven’t time to read this book. I am truly sorry for this delay, my friend. In addition, I am interested in this book to read, and I can’t return this book on time.And any inconvenience these have caused you.
To make it right, I would like to return the book to you at a time. Generally, studying for both of us. And I am trying to return as soon as possible. Alternatively, let me know if you prefer another time to read this book.
Thank you for your consideration, and I promise to be mindful in the future.
Best regards
Abdujabborov Xudoyberdi.

4.5

The letter is somewhat organized, but the flow of ideas is not entirely clear. The writer presents a series of ideas, but they are not well connected, making the letter somewhat difficult to follow. The use of cohesive devices is somewhat repetitive and lacks variety, which affects the overall coherence of the letter.

Suggestions

Use a variety of cohesive devices to ensure smooth transitions between ideas.
Make sure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

The writer uses a sufficient range of vocabulary and there is evidence of some less common items. However, there are several instances of awkward or incorrect word choice.

The letter demonstrates a good control of a range of grammatical structures, with only minor errors. However, there are a few instances of awkward or incorrect sentence construction.

The writer addresses the task and provides a clear and relevant response. However, the letter could be improved by providing more specific details and examples. The writer should also ensure that the chosen format is appropriate for the task.