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The graph shows average house prices in countries from 2007 to 2014.

The line graph compares average house prices in three countries over the period of 18 years, from 1997 to 2014. Overall, all three countries experienced a significant increase in average house prices, with Country A showing the highest prices almost every year. Notably, the average house prices in Country B and C showed nearly the same pattern during the whole period. It is worth to mention that, despite remarkable growth in average house prices in all three countries, all of them underwent a slight decline at some point over the period.
An average price for a house in Country A was the highest in the first and final year of the period. Starting at around 150k in 1997, the average house prices in Country A increased dramatically just over 500k in 2003 before a sudden drop to just below 500k after three years. Since then, there was a steady growth in the prices of houses in Country A until the end of the time period, reaching approximately 600k, which was the prices on the graph.
As for Country B and C, they exhibited nearly similar trends in average house prices, with Country B showing higher numbers. The average price for a house in both countries was at around 125k in 1997, a figure that then continuously rose reaching 350k in Country B and just below 250k in Country C. Similar to Country A, despite increasing remarkably, there was a slight decline in the average house prices in Country B and C in 2008. During the final years of the period, both Country B and C underwent some fluctuation in average house prices, at around 500k and just over 250k, respectively.

6.5

The essay presents information in a logical order, but there are some issues with cohesion and coherence.

Suggestions
  • Use more linking words to improve flow.
  • Clarify some comparisons for better understanding.
  • Ensure consistent use of time references.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary relevant to the topic, but there are some repetitive phrases.

The essay shows a range of grammatical structures but contains some errors.

The essay addresses the task effectively, providing a clear overview and supporting details.

Suggestions
  • Ensure all details are accurate according to the graph.