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Share of income earned by top 1 percent, 1915-2015

The line graph illustrates the data on proportion of revenue top 1 percent of public earners over four decade period starting from 1975 in 7 countries according to CEA 2017 Economic report of the President, relying on World Wealth and Income Database.
From an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that except for the UK and Germany, all countries’ affluent parts’ income recorded from the beginning of the period (1975), and it is notably that every country indicate upward trend, with Italy, Japan and France increasing less significantly compared to others. Additionally, the US has the richest layer while the lowest income belonged to France.
Focusing on Germany, the share of it underwent wild fluctuations over the period by 2007 from 10% to 4% more ,however, this share was not maintained. Although Canada started at approximately 9%, the highest proportion, in 1975, the US overtook, doubling form 8% to 18% when Canada reached to around 14%. In 1990, the UK join the poll and saw a significant increase from 10% to over !5% before plunging by 2%.
As for rest of countries they experienced mildly fluctuation and followed almost similar patterns. They reached nearly 9%., starting at over and under 7% which meant that there is no big difference in the salary of poor and rich.

5.0

The essay presents data in a somewhat structured manner, but lacks clear organization and logical flow. Transitions between points are not always smooth, leading to minor confusion.

Suggestions
  • Organize the essay into clear paragraphs for each country or trend.
  • Use linking words to improve the flow of ideas.
  • Clarify the starting and ending points for each trend discussed.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary, but there are instances of awkward phrasing and repetition.

The essay demonstrates a basic range of grammatical structures, but contains several errors that affect clarity.

The essay attempts to describe the data but lacks precision and completeness in addressing all aspects of the graph.

Suggestions
  • Include more specific data points to support trends.
  • Ensure all countries and time periods are covered accurately.
  • Clarify comparisons between countries.