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The maps below show university sports courts in 1990 and now.

The maps illustrate how university sport court changed from 1990 up until today. Overall, sport court has undergone a number of major changes, with the most significant ones being the addition of a basketball court and an indoor pool which have been made possible at the expense of stage for a park and an outdoor pool respectively.
In the 1990, On the left side, there was a park, which had some trees.Another place ,which was located in parallel to this one, car park .In the center of sport center, there was changing room and reception center for students. On the right hand side, the outdoor pool placed, which was in front of the tennis court with two tennis tables. The cafe was situated on the left side of outdoor pool.
By today, the park has witnessed many alternations, one of which has been replacement of park with basketball court. Another conspicuous development has been the change of outdoor pool into indoor pool, while the cafe and reception center has remained unchanged. On the top of this change, the tennis court on the right hand side has been removed to the left hand side of the university with four tennis tables . On the other hand changing room has been extended by little remove. A final change has been replacement of tennis court into fitness center, which is located on the right hand side of university sport center.

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The essay attempts to describe the changes in the university sports courts, but lacks clear organization and logical progression of ideas.

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  • Use clear paragraphs to separate different aspects of the description.
  • Ensure logical flow by connecting related ideas.
  • Use linking words and phrases to improve coherence.

The essay uses a limited range of vocabulary with some repetition and occasional errors.

The essay demonstrates limited grammatical range with frequent errors affecting clarity.

The essay addresses the task but lacks detailed and accurate descriptions of the changes.

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  • Provide more specific details about the changes.
  • Ensure all significant changes are clearly described.
  • Use precise language to convey changes accurately.