The maps show the seaside town of Tendiff as it was in 1990 and 2010.
The maps illustrates the site of the town of Tendiff in the years 1990 and 2010.
Overall, it is apparent that many facilities were built after the reconstruction. Morever, the infrastructure has also developed.
Starting with the Eastern part, a shop located in the northern east part was converted into a seafood restaurant, while the fast food restaurant opposite it remained unchanged. Furthermore, the arcade near spraymount road was removed to make room for a large supermarket. Both ABC hotel and the cafe in the north remained unchanged.
Turning to the western part, more facilities were constructed there. A police station was built in the northern west part of the site, near the spraymount Rd. An additional main road improved the quality of the infrastructure significantly, called Sandhill Rd. In addition, an array of solar panels were installed in the southern west part, in front of Sandhill Rd, whereas two hotels were constructed next to each other in front of the solar panels.
The essay is generally well-organized with clear paragraphing. Transitions between ideas are mostly smooth, but some sentences could be more logically connected.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to enhance flow.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
- Connect sentences more logically.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary appropriately, though there is occasional repetition and room for more variety.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with minor errors.
The essay effectively addresses the task, summarizing the main features and making relevant comparisons.
Suggestions
- Include more specific details from the maps to enhance completeness.