The maps below show the seaside town of Tendiff as it was in 1990 and 2010.
The maps compare the layout of Tendiff’s seaside town in 1990 and its view in 2010. Overall, the town had experienced significant changes by adding new facilities. It is also clear that the construction of a new road, called “Sandhill” was a major change in this seaside city.
In 1990, there was only a road, called “ Spraymount”, with several amenities on the both sides of the road. While there used to be the ABC Hotel, a café, and a shop to the north of the road, a Seaview Hotel, arcade and fast food restaurant were located on the other side of Spraymount Rd. Additionally, Atlantic Ocean includes four different beaches: Brown, Grey, Diamond, and White.
After the transformation, the town underwent notable changes, by adding new facilities. Due to the addition of Sandhill Rd, new buildings had been introduced across the road, including the King and Family Hotel. Moreover a police station had been built to the northwest of the road, while solar farm had been placed in the southwest of the map.
Along Spraymount Rd, although some building remained unchanged in their original places like the ABC Hotel, café, and fast food restaurant, some changes occurred. The Seaview Hotel, for instance, had been destroyed, while the Arcade had been turned into a supermarket. Finally, the shop had been removed to make place for the Seafood restaurant.
The essay is well-organized and logically structured with clear paragraphing. Transitions between ideas are mostly smooth, though some sentences could benefit from clearer connections.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to improve flow.
- Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea.
- Clarify the relationship between changes and their impacts.
The vocabulary is appropriate and varied, but there are some repetitions and minor errors.
The essay demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures with occasional errors.
The essay addresses all parts of the task, providing a clear overview and detailed comparisons.
Suggestions
- Ensure all key features are mentioned and compared appropriately.