The maps below show the seaside town of Tendiff as it was in 1990 and 2010.
The maps shows the changes in the seaside town of Tendiff between 1990 and 2010. Overall, significant transformations include the removal of Seaview hotel, Arcade, and shop, as well as the addition of Police station, Sandhill RD, King Hotel, Seafood restaurant, and Solar farm.
In 1990, the seaside town had fewer buildings, most of which were located in northern-eastern part, while the opposite part remained undeveloped. The town also had four harbors connected to the Atlantic Ocean.
By 2010, the town underwent remarkable modifications, with many structures being removed, replaced, remained, and newly added. A supermarket was established in the middle of the map, where Arcade was in 1990, with seafood restaurant doing the same with shop in northern side of Spraymount RD. The seaside town was enriched with three new locations, namely King hotel, family hotel and solar farm, in the western-southern part of the map, along the Sandhill RD.
In contrast, nothing happened to fast food restaurant, ABC hotel and harbors, making them remain intact after two decades.
The essay presents information in a logical sequence with some use of cohesive devices. However, the transitions between ideas could be smoother.
Suggestions
- Improve transitions between paragraphs.
- Use more cohesive devices to link ideas.
- Clarify some descriptions for better understanding.
The essay uses a range of vocabulary with some precision. There are occasional errors in word choice.
The essay demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are some grammatical errors.
The essay adequately addresses the task, describing the main features and making some comparisons.
Suggestions
- Ensure all key changes are clearly described.
- Provide more detailed comparisons where relevant.