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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given maps compare the development plan of southwest airport in the next year to its present moment.
Overall, the airport will experience several noticeable changes such as the extension of the building, addition of some new places inside and some rearrangements
In terms of the details, the security passport control along with the passport control of the customers, that stand near each other, both will have remained in the same place after the redevelopment, according to the plan. Some of the gates of the airport will also be in the same directions as they are, given the gates number 1, 2, 3 on the left. Furthermore, the departures and arrivals exits will stay in the same places, with former being on the left and latter on the right.
By delving into the changes, the most significant one will have been the gates extension after the plan will be fulfilled. The airport will build 10 additional boarding gates along with the sky train, that may be convenient for the customers and staff. The building will also get additional place for the car hire. Moreover, there are some internal additions planned. Shops will be added on the way after the passport control. Nevertheless, before the passport check, there will be 2 cafes available along with the ATM machine, near the car hire. On the left, a bag drop will be introduced there and the check in will be relocated to the right of the security passport control.

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The essay presents information in a generally coherent manner, but some transitions between ideas could be smoother.

Suggestions
  • Use linking words to connect ideas more clearly.
  • Ensure each paragraph has a clear main idea.
  • Improve the logical flow between sentences.

The essay uses a range of vocabulary, but there are occasional inaccuracies and repetition.

The essay demonstrates a basic range of grammatical structures, with some errors in complex sentences.

The essay addresses the task and includes relevant information, but some details could be more clearly highlighted.

Suggestions
  • Highlight key changes more distinctly.
  • Ensure all relevant features are covered.