The table and chart below provide a breakdown of the total expenditure and the average amount of money spent by students per week while studying abroad in 4 countries
The given table and bar chart highlight the total expenditure and the average of money spent by students each week studying in 4 countries.
Overall, it is evident that the total expenditure and the average amount of money was the highest in A country, while the figure for D country students spent the least amount of money on examined sections.
If we look at the table, students came from A country spent 875 US dollars totally, which ranked first, followed by B country students ranked second with spending 735 US dollars on study abroad. Meanwhile, students from D country spent 435 US dollars total, which was the least amount of money on study abroad.
As for bar chart, students spend huge amount of money living costs mostly. A country students spent a lot of money on living cost and tuition 430 and 358 US dollars respectively. While students from B and C country spent more money on accommodations. B country students spent 280$, and C country students spent 240$. Meanwhile, students from D country spent least amount of money on all sections.
The essay presents information in a logical order, but lacks clear connections between some ideas.
Suggestions
- Use more linking words to connect ideas.
- Ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.
- Improve the flow between sentences.
The vocabulary is adequate but lacks variety and precision.
The essay contains several grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures.
The essay addresses the task but lacks detail and depth in some areas.
Suggestions
- Provide more detailed comparisons.
- Include specific data from the chart and table.
- Ensure all parts of the task are fully addressed.