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Task 1

The bar chart illustrates the number of households by their yearly income in the US in three different years.
Overall, the number of households by annual income is shown in 5 categories. While the number of households in all categories fluctuated over years, the third category with $75.000-100.000 remained the same. Moreover, the fifth category with $100.000 and more dominated in two years.
In more details, the number of households with the income of $25.000 and less started with 25% in 2007, increasing to nearly 30% in 2011, decreased to 27% in 2015. The the second category with $25.000- 49.000 experienced the same pattern, increasing to 30%, followed by 30% in 2007 and finally, diminished by 2015. Furthermore, the third category held the same pace in chart which is 20%
Regarding the fourth category with $75.000-99.999 of income was the least category of five. It started with 20% and decreased to 8%. Finally, it regained 20% of households with that income. The least fifth category with the yearly income of $100 and more fluctuated over years. In 2007, the proportion of households with the yearly income of $100 and more was 30%. Then, it decreased a little to 27% by 2011. By 2015, the number of households in the US in this category rose significantly to 33%, which was the highest in this region.

5.0

The essay presents information in a logical order but lacks clear connections between ideas. Some data is misrepresented, leading to confusion.

Suggestions
  • Use linking words to improve flow.
  • Clarify points with accurate data.
  • Ensure logical progression of ideas.

The vocabulary is appropriate but lacks variety and precision in some areas.

The essay contains grammatical errors and lacks complex structures.

The essay addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and lacks detailed analysis of the data.

Suggestions
  • Provide accurate data from the chart.
  • Include more detailed comparisons.
  • Ensure all categories are correctly described.